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Halloween

   " So Hinata what are you going to be for halloween?" asked Naruto. Hinata awnsered," A puppy or kitty." " Well I don't think you need to dress up." Naruto said. Hinata asked," Why?" "I think your an angel already." Naruto awsered. * Hinata blushes* " Thanks Naruto-kun."

   The day before Halloween, Hinata and Naruto got invite to go to a Halloween bash at 8:30pm. Here is what the card said. . .
You are invited to Neji's Halloween Bash
To: Naruto and Hinata
From: Neji
When: October 31
Time: 8:30pm - 11:30pm

   On Halloween they went and had fun at Neji's party. Hinata dressed as a puppy and Naruto as a fox pup. Everyone danced and ate sweet, sour, tangy, crunchy, chewy, candies.When the party was over Narugto and Hinata went home. Hinata made Naruto and herself raman for dinner. "Thanks, Hinata this is the best raman ever!" Naruto exclaimed " Your welcome Naruto-kun." Hinata said.

   After dinner Naruto fell a sleep on the floor as usual. Hinata picked and cleaned all the dished. Then she put a pillow under Naruto's head and joined him with her pillow and covered both of them with the blanket.

   The next day Naruto woke up early and saw he was on the floor. He looked over to his sideand saw Hinata laying next to him. He sat up, reached over and gave her a big kiss on her cheek. Than Hinata's face turned a bright tomato red and she woke up form her slumber. They lived happily ever after, well for now.
I love making these send me comments and i promise you that i will make more !!!!!
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perfecthappiness Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
this is good^^
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animegiel360 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
that was awesome
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Ahuxx Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
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sweet but i can write even greater than that thank u
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Ryushi7 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009
nice lemon it was great but it was a little short, were they like in their shippuden forms or was this a diff time
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009   Digital Artist
i know but i really didn't have a bunch of time on my hands when i wrote it. It was in Shippuden. I was hoping to get to write more but i just can't squeeze it in because i'm writing two books and continuing my art works for my friends, but if i ever get time to make another i will
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Ryushi7 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009
alright cool, i might try to make a naruto story too.
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009   Digital Artist
Ok, good luck. I'll be watching to see if u do
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yura32 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
write more plz these r awsome!
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009   Digital Artist
I'll try to work through my busy shedual and see if i have time
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yura32 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
kool thx!
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sakukehater Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
I thought it was sweet and so romantic.
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008   Digital Artist
thanks, i try to make it that way
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vamp-gurl101 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
lol... it was cute..... more write more....
i hinata should have gone a something else
lol :blahblah:
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008   Digital Artist
lol don't worry i'm working on another but it's taking some time
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vamp-gurl101 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
dont take ur time.... hurrry up i love reading fan fiction!
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008   Digital Artist
i'm hurrying as fast as i can , i even got in troule cause i was working on the story instead of my school work
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vamp-gurl101 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
i get in heaps of trouble 4 surfing the net and writing....
i dont do my hmwk till last minute....
poor u... but hurry anyway

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Ryushi7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009
lol who doesnt surf the internet instead of working on homework?Lol btw im writing fanfics maybe a naruto one
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner May 2, 2008   Digital Artist
will do u can count on that , just don't count on it to be really good i'm having to hurry through it
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vamp-gurl101 Featured By Owner May 2, 2008
dont worry... i dont critise much...
tell me when u upload it.....

lol

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hinata123123 Featured By Owner May 2, 2008   Digital Artist
i'll make sure i do
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Sakura--Chan14 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008
Sweet! thanx alot! (in a good way)
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008   Digital Artist
No Prob. always glad to make someone happy by writing stories or poetry : )
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Sakura--Chan14 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008
I know many ppl have converted to kibahina.
but I just wanna know what happens next IDC what you put in it
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008   Digital Artist
well i'm working on the next one it's takeing me time cause of writers block
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Sakura--Chan14 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008
OH! plz plz plz write more those are enjoyable!!!
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008   Digital Artist
ok , ok , but everyone has to keep in mind that i'm a kibahina fan
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008   Digital Artist
Sorry i can't find the time to but if i ever find time i'll make sure i write more
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goldenninja1 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
K keep rockin @ wat u do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XP
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008   Digital Artist
will do
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goldenninja1 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
k XP
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dazzledust Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
great stuff!!! you should make some more!!!!
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008   Digital Artist
thanks, i think i might do one on one of my ocs or use a rp fa story
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dazzledust Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome,sounds good!! :D
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k1100a1121 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
not what i expected could have been better but cute.
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2008   Digital Artist
ty
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k1100a1121 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yw.. i think the story was really good. it goes with what i thought all along.






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im sweet like a cat yet my anger worse than a foxs
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008   Digital Artist
thanks , glad u liked it , but i could have made it better, and that's so true.
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k1100a1121 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I dont know that was pretty awsome. i wont agree with it could have been better cause i dont wnt to be yelled at for agreeing when i dont. confusing




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cat was let out of the box now feel th wrath " MEEEEEEOW" "HISSSSSSSSSSSSS" you heard her back off kiba-kun345
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008   Digital Artist
it's fine i rather hear the truth than a lie
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k1100a1121 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
well i think it was great the way it was and belive me thats the truth.
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:iconk1100a1121:
k1100a1121 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
well i thought it was great the way it was. and believe me thats the truth.
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2008   Digital Artist
k, cool
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MySexyKakashi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
yay Halloween
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hinata123123 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008   Digital Artist
yep
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